Mrs.C, down the road from me people are cutting down the woods that have been their before I was even born! Well, I need the members of clubponypals.com help me write a book about a girl that lives out in the country and a stallion that lives in a wooded area. The girl doesn't have a horse or pony. But, the wooded area the stallion lives in is being cut down, so anyone who reads this forum post, please post your suggestions!
Lizzy1 & Misty | 
Lizzy1 & Cool Mr Robin |
| 2009-09-12 12:29:37 | |
You could have girl find the stallion and start finding ways to save the stallion. If you need more help join the Pony Writers and Drawers club that I came up with. The other members are sure to give you some ideas.
lululauren2000 and Snowdrop | 
lululauren2000 & Snowdrop |
| 2009-09-13 17:32:12 | |
| i think you should go out in the woods before they start cutting agin and go in the woods if you can and see the senery . this was from horsesloveme123 and snowwhite. |
horsesloveme123 & snowwhite |
| 2009-09-27 09:06:36 | |
| Good one! |
Lizzy1 & Cool Mr Robin |
| 2009-10-02 07:21:47 | |
| I don't know. |
Lizzy1 & Cool Mr Robin |
| 2009-10-03 19:02:03 | |
Hey Lizzy! I know what you could write! here:
(person) walked down an old dark path in the dark forest. She stopped and looked around. 'why am I here?' she thought. Then came a neigh. She couldn't help but run down the dirt path towards the neigh! She came to a meadow, and there across it, was a galloping black stallion; but he wasn't galloping for fun; he was galloping of fright! Then (person) heard it. A tractor; but not just any tractor, a wood-cutting tractor, that was cutting down the woods!(person) had to save the black stallion!
Ok, what do you think Lizzy!?!?! |
Britnie & Yuniya |
| 2009-10-05 22:10:15 | |
| Anyone who gives ideas here is in the club! |
Lizzy1 & Cool Mr Robin |
| 2009-10-15 19:01:59 | |
How about this:
(girl) wandered into the woods. Suddenly she heard a frightned whinny. Then a coal black stallion galloped up to her. He gazed at her with eyes full of fright. (Girl) couln't believe it!!! A whriling sound broke the silence. A crew of men was cutting down the forest trees. The stallion kneeled down so (girl) could climb on. After (girl) had climbed on hr galloped through the trees.
lulu
PS How's the story going? |
lululauren2000 & Snowdrop |
| 2009-10-15 19:14:54 | |
It's going to be a book. I need help with the first few chapters. I think it should start a little like this: I remebered that day were I met the most beautiful horse. I quickly picked out a name for him. Well, here is how the story goes. The wind blew in my face as I pedaled my bike down a black top road. Then, I heared a big snort. I knew that sound had to belong to a horse. The wind blew the trees to my left making the leaves rattle. Then a huge black thing jumped the pasture fence that belonged to our neighbor's that had black cows in them. I heared the big clap on the pavment as the animal's hooves hit the pavment. I thought it was a cow , but cows don't jump that high! Then, as it ran into the forest, I saw something sliver fly into the air and land on the black top with a big clinging sound. I leaned my bike against a tree and ran over to the objected. It was a horseshoe and made out of gold? I have never heared or seen a gold horseshoe until now.
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Lizzy1 & Cool Mr Robin |
| 2009-10-18 08:48:35 | |
| Okay, now I need a 2and pargraph |
Lizzy1 & Cool Mr Robin |
| 2009-10-18 08:49:18 | |
